Memory of a First Kiss

I worked as an editor of Tagalog romance novels before. In one of the manuscripts I edited, I was so turned-off with how the writer described the kiss shared by the story's protagonists. The description was so bland, almost without feelings. Out of frustration, I wrote this piece. ;)

My feet grew wings the moment
          your lips touched mine
I closed my eyes tightly as my heart
          started beating rapidly
Incomparable,
          a first kiss is
Like being thrown into the vast universe,
          floating in Milky Way—
Stardust around you and me
          —our galaxy
Like fireworks ablaze against the dark sky
          on New Year’s eve—exhilarating!
Unforgettable,
            a first kiss is…

Copyright © 2006 Avi. www.writing.com

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10 na mga sagot sa Memory of a First Kiss

  1. Sherma ay nagsasabing:

    Hmmmmmm…

    at hmmm… pa!

    I thought you were talking about YOUR first kiss! Waaaaaaaaa

  2. Salve ay nagsasabing:

    MAYBE… 😉

  3. hitokirihoshi_kawaii ay nagsasabing:

    may 1st kiss topic dito… wala bang mas malalim pa.. hehhe. i wish na ang first kiss mo ay kilala ko. wahehehe.

  4. Sherma ay nagsasabing:

    Hmmmm! Girlalu!

    Marami ka na yatang mga sikret sa amin ni Tayns! Lagot ka pag nagkataon. Ha ha ha ha!

  5. Salve ay nagsasabing:

    HA HA HA HA HA! maybe uli… 😀

  6. tayns ay nagsasabing:

    uy salve,

    you’re holding something from us. do tell!

  7. Sherma ay nagsasabing:

    How would she know how a first kiss feels if she…

    AHA! Sino kaya?

  8. Salve ay nagsasabing:

    tayns, sherma, tell about yours and i might tell you mine. hahaha! 😀

  9. Antonette ay nagsasabing:

    So dry vi, it’s supposed to be wet right? Nothing about saliva o t…wag na nga baka ma-ban ako dito hahaha!

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