What has Become of Me?

Hope has abandoned me
left me drenched in my own tears
drowned in solitude
What has become of me?

Fate has walked away,
Displeased at my ungrateful countenance
Tired, like my trampled soul—
crashed into pieces.

Tell me, what has become of me?

Please save me, I need your mercy
Hold my hand tight; don’t let go—
Oh, it’s too late!
You’re late!
I’m drowning,
zapped into the black hole of nothingness.

What—oh, nothing!—has become of me?

Copyright © Avi (Salve) 2006 at writing.com

Another cheezy piece I have written out of frustration at a time when I was trying to find meaning in my life. 😦


6 Responses to What has Become of Me?

  1. badoodles ay nagsasabing:

    what frustrate a lady so creative? you need not find meaning in your life.
    just live life.
    love life.
    your life is love.
    you live love.

  2. Salve ay nagsasabing:

    hi, badoodles! thank you for the comment.
    writing this piece at that time somehow lifted the burden in my heart. but i’ve learned to live life now.

  3. Salve ay nagsasabing:

    Thanks, Hellgar, for submitting this post to PressPosts.com. 🙂

  4. Sherma ay nagsasabing:


    Really really nice girl!

  5. Salve ay nagsasabing:

    you think so?
    Thanks! ;;)

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